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Randy Edwards's avatar

Would it be unkind to say this poem stinks?

In all the best ways.

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Rebecca J. Gomez's avatar

You have a gift for sensory details!

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Buffy Gilfoil's avatar

In this case, I'm glad poems are an aural medium and not something to be smelled.

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Mark Rico's avatar

Your descriptive language is pure poetic hedonism.

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